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advice in sonnet form

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March 15, 2003
advice in sonnet form by mastermindg is witty, sharp and must receive todays Daily Poem.

I am so impressed with this work, you will be as well. (Selected by ^faithwalker)
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In sonnet form I must protest you, miss
Emotion tisn’t for the cowardly
“Which, labouring for invention, bear amiss”
The depth and breadth of our felicity
So, caution and awareness be with you
As well as open-mindedness today
For when you read these sonnets, sadly true,
Their grammar/structure may will you to slay
For though both you and I doth know that frosh
-As they have been so dearly dubbed before-
Do seem to lack a poetic panache
(Their language skills all teachers would deplore)
So please, before your instincts take over,
Do skip the drink and go straight to hungo’er
to my teacher, who has to read hundreds of these soon. i dont envy her
© 2003 - 2024 mastermindg
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angelicaspect's avatar
ha! a lot of people loved this! i didn't know that many people even take the time to read poems here... i sure dont. except in this case, of course. this was great. yep.

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